The 2nd "Midsemester" presentation

For the midsemester I presented my previous works and the new s.o.
the model and plan were centered on the new part.

Project Part

the graphical criticism was centered on the length of the second part which should be shorter for the final presentation.

Process Part

on cardboard the presentation doesn't look as good ..
for the next presentation it should be layout differently

Layout

the architectural discussion here was centered on the functionality of the recreation area of the s.o. and how such space can make unique areas not available in normal space.
for the next steps i drafted a few sketches to guide me on ...

Later thoughts